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Through Shadow

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Alright one more postcardsized Oc watercolor painting is done (: I'm happy with it, Lumi is just my fav oc char ^^ I think it shows in how radiant she is. My little legend. treading through shadow.
Everytime I see hher I think of what she means to me.

Life is a journey no matter what press onward. No matter how dark the skys are don't turn back. The feature belongs to those that believe.

Hope fades but you have to find a way to spark it within you.
And that's what this character does. Luminix. Was created with this purpose.
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500x751px 280.71 KB
Make
Canon
Model
CanoScan LiDE 210
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This is very good and I really love the whole concept. She looks quite lost in the woods... which is enhanced by her expression of feeling scared. - You have done very well to give this impressiong and it really adds to the piece.

I feel if you were to improve then perhaps the trees in the background should all be of similar nature (same species of tree) and perhaps they should be a dark gray or even black as apose to brown. You could have done a lot less detail on these and made them look even better.

As for the grass it's wonderful yes, but a few small strokes to enhance that it is grass and maybe the grass towards the middle of the pic should be darker to really give extra depth to the piece like the grass is going off into the distance.

Over all the character is wonderful, I would have liked to see a little harsher shading on her skin though (under her hair line, under her chin/jaw, and genreally around the edges. Also I feel her right eye (the one on the left of the pic) should be a little darker or the eye on her left (the one on the right of the pic) should have a second light spot to enhance extra light.

I really love the wings coming out of her hair, however the one behind her head should be slightly darker in my opinion.

You did very well with the hair although a few extra wisps coming off would really have enhanced it also with a tad more shade (shadow from her face!).

Finally the glove on her arm is a little difficult to tell appart from the dress. Instead of using a darker shade of the dress you could have tried another colour. If I was doing this I'd of tried a light gray or even a soft purple to enhance the shadows under her arm.

But other than that it's got wonderful potential and it's a lovely piece, keep up the good work <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>